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My Story The Bad Girls Death

Post  Unspoken Honesty on Sun Dec 23, 2012 5:49 am

I'm a writer, "rank" and this is what i recently came up with, please send feedback, thank you.

Dear Diary,
Why me? I'm not the one who should have been chosen. Sure, I've been pretty bad when I was on Earth, But I could have changed - If I had time. I'm Rosetta Chrome. I'm 16, well... I'm always gonna be 16 now. Anyway, Back to the point, I'm dead. I'm not in Heaven, nor Hell. Waiting. There's nothing to be waiting for really. I'm sitting on the spot where I died. Just outside my friend, Lucy's house. By the side of the road. I just saw a car, when i was passing, then-

What could I write? I didn't know what happened then. I saw a light? It all went black? Nothing. I floated out of my body. I didn't know I was dead, until 18 hours later. I tried knocking on the door of my house, as I didn't have a key and my parents did. So, I tried knocking, and my hand went through. I tried screamiong, Obviously, No one could hear me. It was official, I was gone.

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Post  Unspoken Honesty on Sat Jan 19, 2013 8:58 am

(Continued)

I was confused... Where was god? Where was my guardian angel? Who watched over me, during my 16 years on earth? By the looks of it- no one. Just as i was thinking that, i was almost blinded by a light so bright, it could have been heaven itself.
i sheltered my eyes with my transparent hands, but amazingly, it did some good. Not much, though. I closed my eyes, but the light peirced my eyelids. ¨Rosetta...¨ a voice like a melody called out. My eyes shot open, and without a pause- my breath got took away, even though i had no breath. A girl, who looked about 16 years of age, the same as me, looked back at me... I could have been looking in a invisible mirror, we looked exactly the same..!
“Who are you..?” I breathed. She forced a uneasy smile, then sighed. “I am Violetta. Or you can call me Violet... I was your twin... And i am your angel...”

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Re: My Story The Bad Girls Death

Post  IsaacOURWORLD on Sat Aug 30, 2014 8:43 am

Umm..... Continuing? Suspect
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